To: Hermione Granger
From: Alejandro Ruiz
Subjet: Whats going on in Hogwarts ?
Hi Hermione !
How are you ? Whats going on in Hogwarts ?
Here in my school we are fine. Did you get a good mark in your last test ? I think so, Hermione.
Next weekend, I´m watching a film, I´m riding on my bike and I´m having a party. Maybe, you can come to my party. What do you think ?
Hermine, I have to say you somethig. Last saturday, I found a very old book in my house with magic tricks and things related to it. Maybe I can led you the book.
How are Harry and Ron ?
Write soon.
Love, Alex.
( All the information in this e-mail is invented )
1 comments:
Wow Alex!
Very nice job. It' amazing how well you write! I'm very proud of you.
Two little things:
* The difference between "say" and "tell":
- You say something
- You tell someone something
- "I have to say you something"--> "I have to tell you something"
* "Maybe I can led you"-->"Maybe I can lend you"
Congratulations!
Keep it up!
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